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Under my King Single bed there was a door, it was brown with black hinges and the handle was shaped as a key. As I turned the handle the key came off, with a tag saying unlock. Wondering what could behind the mysterious door I thought to myself is this a good idea. The door opened, one step and I went down.
I looked around me there was lots of trees, my eyes glazed up trying to find the door...it wasn’t there, than I heard a sound, I never heard before. What are those glowing things?
Paige I love the adventurous and mysterious feel to your story, wondering what the doorway actually leads to, and such a suspenseful ending. I like how you have the door actually disappearing, and ending with a question is a nice touch that made me want to read more! Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I love writing and when I write I love when ideas pop into my head. I have to say I think this is my best 100WC ever!
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