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Wednesday, April 6, 2016

My Senses Poem From Surfing


Senses poem
I could smell the fresh and salty air from the beach.
I could smell the fresh food from the cafe across the road.
I could smell the wetsuit filled with water.

I could see lots of dogs, even a pug!
I could see people, shells and rocks.
I could see a boat in the distance.
I could see the sun glistening on the water.

I could feel the sharp sea shells scratching against my feet, I could feel the sand between my toes, my feet sinking into the sand. I could feel the sharp pain in my tailbone as I fell off the board, when I thought the ground was not close, but it was.
I could feel the water dripping from the wetsuit.
I could feel the wind when I stand up on my board.
I could feel the fear as I walked through the cave, thinking it would collapse like a cake collapse as a spoon went through.


I could taste the salty water when the waves came and splashed me, I could taste the sand when I fell off the board.
I could taste salt as I breathed in.




I could hear the dogs barking, the waves crashing against my board and my body when I fell off.
I could hear the water bouncing around like a ball bouncing.
I could hear the rocks filling in the cave as I run through it.

I did my dream goal, I am proud, I am happy and if I could I would do it all over again!